Thread Barren
It’s over
It’s the end
I can’t do it again
Over and over
It seems
That the seams
Have torn
For the last time
No mending is needed
The strings are too bare
From baring
Thread barren
Tearing
At the seams
So it seems
It’s over
It’s the end
I can’t mend it again
© Jennifer David 2013
Writings of a Mrs 
Loved your simple prose…I know of things unraveled as well
There are times when simplicity says it best… 🙂
smooth, and beautifully written. sadly, i related to every emotion.
Thank you.
I think everyone can relate to this feeling at some point in their lives or another…
Perfect. Thank you.
You’re welcome Taylor 🙂
Although the message is sad, I enjoyed your playing with words – and the repetition worked well to emphasize the meaning.
Thank you Teagan!
Thanks for visiting my blog. I really like this. Simple but evocative.
Thank you. I appreciate you taking the time to comment!
Some times things are better left ‘simple’.
Cheers!
Jennifer
I like it. Sometimes you can’t mend things back together, because there’s nothing left to hold it together. I like the style of this.
It is sad but true.
Thank you 🙂
You’re welcome Jennifer. Good writing and a good read.
Thank you.
Oh wow, is that screenshot from the french movie Irréversible?
The poem is amazing but yeah I started to imagine how the poem related to the film haha, it’s great standing alone too
“…too bare from baring…” I like how forms of the same word are used in this manner. Nice poem, Jennifer. Thanx for sharing it with us and for visiting my blog site. Have a wonderful day.
Thank you. I like to play with words and expression.
I’m glad to see that you enjoyed it.
Jennifer